Thinking Question
One thing that really confused me in this short story was the whole dream sequence, hallucination, mindscape, what have you, which Farquhar "lived through" in the moments between the board falling away and his neck breaking. The whole sequence of events within the "dream" followed seamlessly from the story's earlier events, so much so that it gave very little indication that anything was out of place. From all indication, Farquhar seemed to think the events within his dream were really happening, yet by the end of the story it is obvious that they were fabrications of his own mind.
The whole thing reminds me of the idea of your life flashing before your eyes, except in this case instead of seeing his past, Farquhar was envisioning a possible future, one where he could escape and return to his family rather than dangle from a bridge with a broken neck.
What do you think happened in Peyton's "dream"? Was he dreaming, or experiencing something else entirely? Why do you think the author chose to include the dream sequence, rather than leaving out the majority of the third chapter and skipping to Peyton's death? Do you think it made Peyton a more likeable or relatable character? Why?
Wow, this raised so many questions in my mind. I definitely felt really bad for Peyton more so because he died in his dream right before he got to touch his wife. It's like in Avengers Endgame, Hawkeye went back in time and he yelled out for his daughter and she was so close he almost got to see her, but then he was sent back. He tried so hard to see what he loved that he thought he had lost. And that's what made the scene that much more painful. In the same way I just really wanted him to be alive and safe and get to see and feel his wife. And then he died. Does anybody feel that?
ReplyDeleteI love your allusion to the Avengers movie, Brooke!
DeleteYes, the brain always wants the good guy to make it out alive. We hold out for hope. I wanted him to live to see his wife as well. It made the story dramatic.
DeleteSomething to notice - the sequence of Farquhar's heightened senses in the dream sequence - 1st heightened hearing & then vision, etc. Nothing of importance, just interesting :)
ReplyDeleteI think the author shows the whole dream sequence to build suspense and draw us into the story. If we didn't know what was going on in his mind, it would be boring. It helps us see a picture of the hope he had to escape, and be free of the horror of war.
ReplyDeleteNice insight, Ethan. This type of writing is called Stream of Consciousness writing. We'll talk about it in class.
DeleteI agree with Ethan. I think the point of this story was to show readers how many things we don't see because we don't want to see them. I can't think of any other purpose for this story besides entertainment.
ReplyDeleteI agree this book wasn't really thrilling, maybe they just wanted to catch our attention.
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